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Thank you!

Thank you for the critique!

Thanks for the critique!

Regarding leaves - for some reason I find twisting leaves harder than arrows. I will try to keep your tips in mind when moving forward.

Hello,

overall your work looks good, though in organic boxes you forgot to draw through your forms - this helps to understand 3D space better.

good luck in 250 boxes challenge, it gets boring after a while so do remember the 50% drawing is fun part from Lesson 0

Hello,

good job completing the lesson! most exercises are done well, here's critique:

• for Arrows I see a lot of chicken scratching (confidence >> accuracy in drawabox ), also there's not much of them you could have done more - I suggest doing some confident arrows

• organic ellipses/curves - I see some lacking line confidence in some of them once again, also your sausage hardly rotate in 3d space - most ellipses/curves have same degree which while possible hardly happens in real life (look up some slinky photos), I suggest to try contours exercise with varying ellipses degrees

Good luck in your art journey!

Thank you so much for such a comprehensive critique! I will keep your advice in mind while continueing my drawabox journey.

I think the best ones are these (just keep in mind to prioritize smooth lines over accuracy):

• Ellipses in planes - you get to practice straight lines and ellipses, though lines are short

• Ghosting long lines

• Ghosting curves (place 3 points randomly, then try connecting them with a smooth curve in single motion)

Hello,

here's the critique:

• Arrows: edges look a bit sketchy, make sure you use ghosting & confident lines when adding extra lineweight

• Contour ellipses: you prioritize hitting edges instead of confident lines - getting confident ellipse in is more important (as accuracy will improve with practice)

• Contour curves: mostly OK, just ends of some of them are sketchy

• Textures: OK

• Dissections: OK

• Intersection: OK

• Organic Intersection: mostly OK, though contours once again do not look confident

I think you can move on to next lesson, though in your warm ups do keep in minds to focus on line confidence

Good luck in your art journey!

Hello, sure more critiques are always welcome :)

I do plan on continuing the course just taking a break from drawabox for a while (250 boxes and textures were quite tiring)

Hello,

good job completing Lesson 2, all exercises look great though not much to say, the only mistake I see is in shading on intersections - when you shade round forms like sphere and cylinder with hatching lines that kinda flattens the form (i.e. spheres look cut off) - instead try hatching like exercise suggests.

Good luck in your art journey!