samuele_caldini

You did a really nice job, I like the effect you've achieved with the brush for the background.

Thank you :) Also yours are pretty cool!

Thanks a lot for your feedback!

I made that mistake with the contour ellipses because I wasn't yet full aware of how the organic form sat in space; I started understanding during the contour curves and mostly during the dissections and the organic intersections.

Thank you very much for the critique, it's really appreciated :)

Hi, I will be critiquing your work!

Lines

They are mostly smooth and they maintain a constant trajectory, some of the are slightly curving near the points(in the ghosted lines) but they got better as you moved foward withe the others exercises.

Ellipses

You made a good job in the tables of ellipses and in the ellipses in planes; the ellipses in the funnels are confident (which is mostly what you're aiming for), but there are some that don't have the minor axis aligned, not a big deal, but keep that in mind, so you can fix that as you move on.

Boxes

Really good job also here, there are of course some mistakes in the perspective, but you will gradually fix them in the 250 box challenge. You seem to have tried to correct a few edges by adding line weight, which makes the mistakes even more visible (especially on the inner edges). Aim to draw an edge only once and add line weight on the outer edges only to make the form clearer.

Hi, thank you very much for the review :) I'll work on the mistakes you have underlined.